Thank you. I had trouble tying together the ending. I knew what I wanted the last line to be but getting the paragraph before it to lead to it properly was a bit of a problem for me.

That happens to me a lot. I always think of the last line early on then fill in the rest as it comes.

I'm glad the mystery worked for you. It's one of the reasons I love Urahara so much. You can never tell for sure what he's thinking.