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Given The Chance I Will Create Chaos~ ([personal profile] corelle) wrote2008-06-07 08:16 pm

Fic: Keeping It Equal

Title: Keeping It Equal
Fandom: Bleach
Pairing: Renji/Shuuhei
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: unbeta'd, handcuffs, biting, ball gag
Note: Written for [livejournal.com profile] bleach_bdsm's Spring Fling Contest. Happy birthday [livejournal.com profile] gogochan!



Hard hands are on his hips, fingers digging in, leaving angry bruises behind.

He shivers as long red hair ghosts across his nipples, tickling his skin.

Metal bites into thin skin, blood trickling down his sore wrists.

He moans as a damp tongue traces the scars on his face, lapping at sweat and tears.

Suddenly the rhythm changes, the angle shifts and his vision swims.

Begging breathlessly he pleads for more, choking when sharp teeth sink into his neck.

His breathe hitches and thighs strain, as blood seeps out of the bite mark and liquid heat splashes his belly.

**

Two hours later and he’s the one on top, bloodied wrists aching as he hovers over the red-head’s body.

Muffled moans fill the air, the gag sitting pretty between glistening swollen lips.

Leaning forward he licks up the arched spine, gasping when the man tightens around him.

He grinds in deep, hipbones pressed against firm ass cheeks, nails dragging over heaving sides.

Sliding a hand up he wraps it around the man’s throat and squeezes, growling as the red-head tries desperately to swallow.

His muscles snap tight, cock pulsing, fire spreading through his body as he shakes and shouts.

**

Morning comes and he’s back on bottom.




[identity profile] imladra.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 08:14 am (UTC)(link)
Short, to the point, and hot. Love it. ^__^

[identity profile] alstair.livejournal.com 2008-06-08 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Agreed. :D This piece says a lot with a little :D And totally yummy :D

ooh la la!

[identity profile] gogosama.livejournal.com 2008-06-09 10:53 am (UTC)(link)
WOOT! Delicious! So subtle, yet so effective. Loved that both boys got their time and top. ((and love, love, love the uke!Shuu. Mmmmmmmmmmm))

THANK YOU SO MUCH, CORELLE! Thank you for writing this. Thank you for entering the [livejournal.com profile] bleach_bdsm contest.
Very, very tasty, indeed. And extra-special considering that we first "met" a year ago over the Ren x Shuu (or Shuu x Ren?) flashfic! xxx

Re: ooh la la!

[identity profile] corelle.livejournal.com 2008-06-21 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
*is late*

SO glad you liked it! I really wanted to do the sequel to Good Times but it just didn't want to be finished and this came out instead. *shrugs*

Hey it has been a year hasn't it? XD

Re: ooh la la!

[identity profile] gogosama.livejournal.com 2008-06-28 10:31 am (UTC)(link)
It has been a year! And this was very, very lovely. You did a good thing by following your muse.

xoxo

[identity profile] gimmilemon.livejournal.com 2008-06-10 05:35 pm (UTC)(link)
X___________X

*is dead from the short intensive hotness*

[identity profile] nightswhisper.livejournal.com 2008-06-11 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
merrrow. Very direct. Very hot. And a nice view on things. Where's there a rule people are locked into seme and uke roles? I dun see one!

[identity profile] kaphinated.livejournal.com 2008-06-12 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
short&sweet. although i think its ripe with unexplored possibilites and hints at a lot more to come? *Hinthintnudgenudgwinkwink*

[identity profile] corelle.livejournal.com 2008-06-21 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
Glad you enjoyed it!

Don't know if I'll be writing too much more of this pairing or not. I still need to finish the sequel to Good Times for Gogo but other than that we'll have to see. *shrugs*